Chapter 28 is up! I still haven’t found beta 🥺 I’ve tried to read it through several times and every time seem to find something to change, so enough for this evening.. I’ll go through it tomorrow again with fresh eyes. I hope it’s not too clumsy?
On further thoughts on the story, I already completed it in Finnish and plan for a third book to follow the story line. However I started thinking that I ’d give this English version alternative ending that wouldn’t lead to the third part.
This translation is taking much of my time and the lack of feedback affects on my motivation as well, so this feels like a better solution. BUT, who knows you might enjoy the alternative ending better 🤔 😃